Aet Lindling

"kneeled = knelled" Incorrect. lordgluzman is right, it is spelled kneeled.

I'm a bit torn as to whether this is supposed to be hilarious or if I'm supposed to read this solemnly.

Change it to R. Your friend will still be able to see it. Just hit the Edit button on the post.

Well, I dunno what to say besides Twilight. :P It hurt me physically, and that's the complete truth.

You need to post 2 reviews, as per the 2:1 review to work ratio rule.

*ahem* Ajuntah is right. Also, you've done those two, but posted another thing of yours. You now need to critique another 2 things, to keep a 2:1 ratio.

omg ayra + monki why r u so mean? those are bad reviews and they will hurt gothfirls feellings this is actualy an amazin poem guys why u so mean????????????????????????????????? ...

This is all I've written, and I've kind of abandoned it for now. I have a bunch of dusty plot in the attic of my brain though, so it'll probably ...

I have this little thing, I don't crit submissions made by people who haven't fulfilled the 1:2 crit rule, or close enough. *placeholder for guaranteed crit as soon as you ...

Yeah, she's been doing that... Luckily, good ol' Clau/Till/Suzanne came 'round and deleted all of her self-critiques. :D

Woo, already! Google traveling christmas flamingo and this is the top result. :D

Ooooh. I could make out a meaning after a lot of thinking, and it was a really nice experience, this wasn't all that bad at all.

You could make this an avant-garde piece, on its own, if you changed it around a little bit, but otherwise this is just silly. Why post one sentence as the ...

Lol, I wuv it. ...this may be my first short, "nothing to crit" critique, but it deserves it. This be perfect!

Eep eep eep no! That last comma had every right to be there! *shakes head* Now it's a run-on sentence. But I agree, this makes more sense in Other Fiction. ...